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Post by sunny on Feb 8, 2009 13:52:04 GMT -5
[[Oh. Okay. Well, at least you know what you're talking about! ^^ ]]
The Aron stood his ground, watching as the other pokemon was called back, and he relaxed slightly, believing that it would be an easy one on one battle. However the trainer soon pulled out another pokeball and released a yellow, spunky pokemon.
The Aron frowned, so much for even odds, however, he failed to notice that Leo had also been called back, and as he looked around for the other pokemon, he was too distracted to notice the oncoming attack. Not that it would've mattered, it would've hit him somehow anyways. The two attacks were a deadly combo and the steel pokemon winced, they were even more powerful since the electric pokemon had a couple levels of advantage.
Taking a shuddering breath and fighing the electric bonds that constricted him, he charged towards the pokemon with a Tackle attack.
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Post by dreamer on Feb 8, 2009 18:22:59 GMT -5
Dream shook her head. " Allright Spark! Full Force ahead with Thunderwave and Thundershock!" Dream shouted. Spark jumped over the Aron's tackle attack, swiftly turned around, and with all the force he could muster, he used Thunderwave. This one had to hit the Aron and paralize him! Then with the remaining force, he used Thundershock. That Thundershock left the Pikachu panting for breath, but the Aron would take alot of danmge, he knew. This one could be strong enough to make the Aron faint, if possable.
OOC: *searchs for a berry tree for Spark* hehe
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Post by sunny on Feb 9, 2009 17:51:46 GMT -5
The mighty Aron growled with immense frustration, his metal eye ridges coming together in a snarl. Why did his attacks keep missing? Maybe he really wasn't as good as he thought... No! That was impossible! Shaking the uneeded thoughts away the pokemon focused on the electric pokemon. If the Pikachu could dodge his attacks, why couldn't he dodge its attacks?
No reason at all. But the Thunderwave attack was coursing towards him and it was too late to move, but the attack passed by harmlessly only a faint twinge of pain. Since he was already Paralyzed, from the last Thunderwave, this one had nearly no effect.
Pleased, the pokemon bounded back to his feet, ready to attack, but all too soon, those paralyzing bonds he had forced away before came surging back into his body. Seeing the rather large bolt of electricty, the Aron let out a small yell and shook his head frantically, he didn't want to faint. However, pretty soon his whole body froze up and he was soon unable to move even his head.
The attack knocked him to the ground, but the pokemon had not fainted. However, he was too weak to move. So, he could probably be captured if you wished. The pokemon pouted, still unable to move.
Aron has been defeated! Pikachu gains a level! Leo gains a level!
::aron::
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Post by dreamer on Feb 9, 2009 18:46:40 GMT -5
Dream grabs out a pokeball "Allright! An Aron!". She threw the pokeball at the Aron. The pokeball hits the Aron. Dream then sits down and begins to wait. I hope that i can catch this Aron She thought. OOC: GRRR! Really short post!
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Post by sunny on Feb 9, 2009 21:12:32 GMT -5
[[ I can understand that you don't have much to say for that particular part, but we really would like it if you could lengthen your posts a little more. A paragraph is required, and you can see the mods write much more than that. Perhaps, you could make your posts a little longer than four sentences? ]]
The Aron quivered as the cold steel of the ball touched his cooling body, the sphere surrounded him with a warm maroon glow and the pokemon was sucked inside. The Aron may have been weak, but it was stubborn and persisted. The ball shook violently and seemed on the verge of breaking. However, the Aron eventually tired and gave up as the ball snapped closed with a ping.
Congrats! You have captured an Aron!
::aron::
Gender: ::male:: Level: 7 Attacks: Tackle, Harden
A soft flutter of wings came from the side of the road, but from up above. The tree shook slightly as a Taillow gracefully glided out, spreading its wings. The bird flew in soft circles, just enjoying the bright, slightly chilly day, the wind under its wings. It soon swooped down, adding the up and down direction to its flying. On one of its trips down, the Taillow caught sight of Dream.
The pokemon flew down once more, gracefully landing in front of her and sending up a small cloud of dust. It tilted its head to the side, cawing once, then adding, +Battle me!+ It ruffled up its feathers, appearing larger now. It seemed that pumped up .... in an elegant way. The bird hopped a little bit closer to the trainer, then started preening its feathers, making them simply gleam in the faint sun.
A wild Taillow has appeared!
::taillow::
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Post by dreamer on Feb 9, 2009 22:53:40 GMT -5
OOC: Ok. I was sent here by a mod from Pokemon Anrui, Crocodile. He told me to sign up here and learn how to do Lit/Semi-Lit RPing. Guess im not doing well XD BIC: Dream spotted the Taillow and threw out her Aron, Metal in the same gracefull way. The Aron came out gracefully and landed in frount of the Taillow. "Metal, Use Harden then use Tackle" She said, then grinned. Taillow were a bit vain, yes, but they can fight when needed. Metal harded his amour, raising his defense, then ran to the Taillow and used Tackle, landing on top of the Taillow and ruffing her feathers and causing danmge. <Hey Featherbrain! Try and get me!> Metal squealed.
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Post by sunny on Feb 10, 2009 21:29:56 GMT -5
[[ Oh really? Hm. Well, you're not doing bad, but there is room for improvement. If you want, I could help you along if you want. Give you some helpful tips and hints and stuffers. ^^ There was a time when /I/ sucked at role-playing. >.> That was embarrasing. Compared to me back then, you are quite good. xDD ]]
The Taillow blinked curiously at the trainers, before cocking it's head curiously to the side. The sudden apparence of the Aron was rather interesting. This pokemon was rather well sheltered and had never seen a tame pokemon up close. From the air yes, but not up close.
The bird let out a short caw, and hopped forwards to examine the glistening steel type. The flying-type cried out in alarm as the pokemon rather suddendly charged towards her. In her haste to flee, she tripped over her feet and stumbled, giving the Aron an easy target.
She winced and let out a squawk of pain as she flapped her away out form underneath the Aron, with a mencing glare. She snapped a reply. <Alright Metal Head! Bring it on!>
Getting into the idea of battling, the pokemon decided to start of simply. Beak glowing with a dull blue hue, the bird soared into the air and quickly dive bombed the Aron with a Peck attack.
Taillow has attacked with Peck!
[[ Okay, not bad, but I would suggust centering it and spacing it out a bit more, so it looks neater. That, can really impact the way the writing looks. Also, you didn't know for sure that the Tackle would hit. Power playing is not allowed. You can say... "The Aron charged towards the Taillow at a might speed making the attack hard to miss." but you cannot acaully saw it caused damage unless it's an attack that has 100% accuracy ]]
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Post by dreamer on Feb 12, 2009 10:40:32 GMT -5
OOC: OK I would appreciate it alot ^_^ BIC: The Aron was scared but he didnt give up. He dicided to confuse the Taillow by running around and around. If the Taillow flew down, he could jump, go behind the Taillow and tackle it there! While he was running, he harded his armor just in case the Taillow took him down behind him before he could jump.
Dreamer would have liked him to stop running around and around but she wondered if he had an idea that could get her a Taillow
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Post by Sp❣rit on Feb 16, 2009 18:40:07 GMT -5
OOC:
Hey. I don't mind giving you a hand as well. :3
But remind me to give Crocodile a good smack to the face. That's kinda insulting, if you ask me.
- Use Spell Check. If you don't have if, just type all of your posts into Word Document. That way, you can catch your mistakes.
-It gets kind of annoying when your writing style is like how a reporter talks. You're a writer, not a reporter. ;3
-Try not to repeat things over and over. "She threw it gracefully" "he landed gracefully" "Oh my god, they were SOOOOOOOOO GRACEFUL!"
Look up synonyms, and experiment with other words. Who knows...It might sound a lot better.
-Add some more detail into your trainer. I know that she could be doing a lot more than just thinking. Is she nervous? Is she anxious for having a Taillow? Is she planning her future with the bird?
BIC:
With her beak ever glowing, she was determined to make some type of contact with the Aron, until something stopped her from going any further. The Aron was moving about in odd, intricate patterns around the snow covered ground. Now, he was definitely not the fastest thing around. She won the battle against speed. However, his reflexes were just a little better, in that instant, and she had to pull back into the air to avoid colliding with the ground.
<You look stupid from up here!> She called down, frustrated with her failed Peck attempt. She had no idea what was in for her when she would manage to make a direct attack against him, but for now, ignorance is bliss. Her not knowing gave her even more confidence to continue this thing. Her wings glided through the winter’s bitter air, the sun’s light not providing much comfort at all with all of the clouds blocking its path. Gazing down onto the ground, the steel covered body of the Aron started to blend in with the snow, only his movement gave his position away to her. With a smirk, she readied herself with a Focus Energy, gathering up power inside of her beak and wings, her attempts to do damage could influence the entire battle if she could strike a weak spot.
<You’re just wasting your energy! Those stubs you call legs won’t get you far!> She cried, her wings raised higher into the air as she prepared to dive down. She went into a nosedive, speed carrying her straight down, to the point where you would think that she wasn’t even going to hit the Aron at all. She was a couple of feet of the ground when she managed to pull herself out of the dive, using a Quick Attack to chase after the Aron with surprising speed for her level.
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Post by dreamer on Apr 6, 2009 22:43:55 GMT -5
Dream shook her head."Metal, return!"She shouted. The Aron looked up as the red light consumed it. Dream put the pokeball away and took out another one. "GO! Cambow!"She shouted as she threw the pokeball. The pokeball opened and white light shot out of it, landed on the ground, and formed into a Metitite. "Metitite! Confusion!" She yelled. With his psychic powers, a blue orb of energy began to wrap itself around the Psychic type. He focused on the target. Attempting to launch the blue, plasma like substance at his target. "Good Job Metitite!" She shouted. OOC: I think i spelt the Metitite wrong T_T
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Post by Sp❣rit on Apr 7, 2009 12:27:35 GMT -5
OOC:
Uh. Dreamer. That was both Godmoding and Powerplaying. o.o' You can't do that. I mean, now I can't even reply to your post. You did it for me.
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Post by dreamer on Apr 7, 2009 12:30:07 GMT -5
OOC: Confusion attack I recalled the Aron and took out the Metitite. Maylene Did so in that one episode when Ash challenged her, her Metitite forced Ash's Staravia down using Confusion. That episode was before Episode: Enter Galactic!
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Post by Sp❣rit on Apr 7, 2009 12:43:07 GMT -5
OOC:
Ah. No. o.o I get that. I saw the Episode. But you controlled my character. You made the Taillow "fall to the ground" which means that you guaranteed that your attack would hit. Confusion isn't an 'always hit attack'. That's why I'm saying this.
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Post by dreamer on Apr 7, 2009 12:50:43 GMT -5
OOC: *deadz* Im. soooo. Confused.
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Post by Sp❣rit on Apr 7, 2009 13:31:07 GMT -5
OOC:
This. This is Powerplaying. I looked it up because I get confused with my vocabulary.
Confusion does not guarantee a hit. You didn't even give my character a chance to react.
Instead of "The Taillow fell down, forced by the Meditite", you can try something like this:
With his psychic powers, a blue orb of energy began to wrap itself around the Psychic type. He focused on the target. Attempting to launch the blue, plasma like substance at his target.
Attempting. Use words like that if you can. Then it's not Powerplaying.
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Post by dreamer on Apr 7, 2009 15:43:30 GMT -5
OOC: Kay then, All these posts can be deleted cause I'll change right now. *Changes*
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Post by Sprite on Apr 7, 2009 16:51:33 GMT -5
OoC// Oh and it's really nice if you give the mod a little hint of your intentions. Like.... "BlahBlah shot the string shot towards the Pidgey. Hopefully, it would wrap around the bird pokemon so that BlahBlah could yank it closer for a close-range attack." If the mod is smart, they'll probably play along with your intentions if they allow the attack to hit. I always do it, but I always get stupid mods. Incase you still don't get it, I'll use a perfect example for your case: "If the Confusion did catch the Taillow, it was the type that would pull the bird pokemon to the ground". See? That way it's always an 'if'.
BiC//
The Taillow swooped through the air as it eyed up the Meditite more carefully. How would this battle end? It's wings were only begining to become tired, but if it were on the ground it would be at a great disadvantage. If this battle were a long one, it would have a terrible ending. So it was best off short. The Taillow dived down in closer for a better view, but unfortunately for it, it was at a terrible time.
The Confusion attack engulfed it and the Taillow soon lost all senses. Sight, Hearing, Smell, and even Balance. All of this forced it to fall down and crash into the ground. Oh no. Oh no. Oh no. It could hear a distinct crack as its wing hit the ground in an odd fashion. Its eyes shut as pain shot throughout its body originating from the wing. It was without a doubt broken. It hobbled up onto its feet tried to stretch it out. FAIL. It winced as it fell back down. <Bastards....> it growled lowly, unabled to do anything at the moment.
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Post by dreamer on Apr 7, 2009 17:21:48 GMT -5
OOC: OK I get it. BIC: Metitite grinned as the Taillow fell. "Good job Cambow, Return" She called out. Cambow grinned as the red light consumed it. "OK then, Birda! Its time to shine!" She shouted as a poke ball whizzed in the air. It opened and white light flew right out of the poke ball, and formed a Staravia. "Birda Growl then Wing Attack!" Dream commanded. Birda growled then flew up in the air. He soared down, one wing glowing. If this attack hit then it would most likely be all over.
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Post by Sp❣rit on Apr 7, 2009 17:38:47 GMT -5
The Taillow shuffled in her spot after the sore battering from the Confusion attack. It had been a painful, agonizing experience for it. With its dirtied body covered in scratches and bumps, it still had this strong will in it to fight. The only problem was getting up off the ground in order to do it. As Dream returned the Meditite, its curious eyes shone against the new, proud figure before it.
<A Staravia?!> The Taillow’s surprised gasp was the most it could let out before getting gunned down by its powerful Wing Attack. It was knocked out instantly.
All participating Pokemon Gain a level
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Post by dreamer on Apr 7, 2009 18:05:55 GMT -5
Dream walked up to Birda "You were great Birda, Now you deserve a rest. Return" She said. She aimed her pokeball at Birda. Birda was engulfed in a red light then back in his pokeball. Dream looked at the Taillow, now fainted. She took out a Heal Ball. It was time she used one of them. She threw it at the Taillow. It opened and red light erupted out of it, engulfed the Taillow and sucked it in.
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