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Jan 9, 2012 20:05:11 GMT -5
Post by Sp❣rit on Jan 9, 2012 20:05:11 GMT -5
[W]IP!
I don't think your background is very clear; I don't like accepting things that are hard to understand, so if you clean a few things up then I can accept it.
What's the dealio with her father?
Why did the mother just realize what was wrong with her baby? She should've known like, right away.
How old was she when she was abandoned? Because if she was a baby then she should be dead. A newly hatched Seviper wouldn't be able to take care of her.
I would also guess that her English isn't very good, since she wouldn't be around people at such a young age, where you kind of develop and learn from others. Could you go into that too?
I'd also guess that they wouldn't know a lot of 'common sense' things, that civilized people would have. It would be handy to slap things like that in the app as well. So yeah, try to answer things like this!
I love her picture by the way. <3
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Jan 9, 2012 20:53:47 GMT -5
Post by Sp❣rit on Jan 9, 2012 20:53:47 GMT -5
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