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Post by KAT on Feb 3, 2012 16:49:33 GMT -5
Full Name: hanna lee gale Gender: female Age: fourteen 06/10
Appearance: Hanna always wears the same thing, regardless of the occasion she's going to attend. Her long blonde hair extends to her knees, while she wears little white wings on a headband that stick out behind her ears. A long white dress covers her entire body that looks a bit too big for her, but Hanna doesn't care what people think of her. She's too ignorant to think ill of others. The white dress has a stripe pattern running down the from and sides, while the sleeves swallow her little arms up completely. She doesn't wear shoes, which in turn causes her feet to look a bit swollen and disfigured. The appearance doesn't bother her though--her grandparents never made her wear shoes and when she DID try, they were too tight and made her feel clausterphobic. So now she just runs around with no shoes on. Her feet are rough and scaly on the bottoms, and she cannot feel anything from the ankle up because of this.
Background: Hanna has no recollection of her beginnings. All she can remember is that she was taken in by an elderly couple when she was a baby, or that's what they told her when she was old enough to understand. They found her in the forest while taking their daily stroll, wrapped up in the dress she is now seen wearing around. They named her and took her in, raising her until she decided to set out to look for her real parents. Her foster parents didn't want her to go, fearing she might never find her real parents or that something bad might happen to her out in the real world since Hanna hardly thought ill of anyone. But she went out anyway, hoping to get a Pokémon friend to help her in her search for her true parents. At this point she still has no real direction of where to go, so she's just following the path all starting trainers do. She's also hoping that people in towns will recognize her appearance and help lead her on the path to her true parents.
Personality: Hanna loves people and Pokémon. Growing up with a loving foster family who enjoyed having Pokémon friends around, the girl has a hard time seeing the evil in anyone. This means she is very gullible and innocent, and can easily be taken advantage of by practically anyone. Even pokemon, since she was born with the unique ability to understand pokespeech. The only emotion she seems to know is pure happiness, and it's hard to bring her down. Overall, she's a genuinely happy soul. True, she's not scared of new people, but meeting her real parents is the one thing she's truly afraid of. She also has abandonment issues because of her parents leaving, and tends to run away from bad experiences if things aren't going the way she wants them to. She also tends to blame others if something bad happens. She never wants to take the blame for anything, and loves to run away from responsibility.
Info: AWYEAH.
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Post by Sp❣rit on Feb 3, 2012 23:05:30 GMT -5
Hanna has some sue-ish qualities, so I'm gonna try and help you out with that so she doesn't become a boring character for you to RP.
Appearance:
-- Blonde hair: Just one of those qualities that makes her seem a lot prettier than the average person. She doesn't care what other people think of her, but there's gotta be something that she's self conscious about. Everyone has a feature about themselves that they aren't happy with. It could be a big nose, bad skin, hair issues, not attractive sexually, etc -- Runs around in a dress: wat. it's winter. Girl you are going to get frostbite. -- No shoes: Maybe you should go into detail about how horrendous her feet are, lulz. Explain this somehow in your history. This is a pretty odd fact to be left alone completely, so go into it! What's the reasoning?
Background:
--Retrograde Amnesia: It's a common theme in stories and tv shows, and it's also a part of 'lazy writer's syndrome'. Girlllll why didn't you add about what caused this stuff? You missed out on a large part of her older life that could explain who she is as a person. What if people recognized her? You're limiting yourself plotwise by doing this. So yeah look into this.
Personality:
-- Good looker + Happy person that is so kind and stuff + Gullible (sometimes Klutz applies): Common theme here. I like, see this so much in character apps that it kills their individuality. EXPAND LADY. It's like you guys are all taking the same character and throwing it up over and over, and it's so silly. You can do better than this, I believe in you!
So dude, I'm gonna give you an assignment:
Look here and pick out three negative traits that doesn't involve being klutzy/dim-witted. Add a sentence (or more if you want) for each one that describes how she thinks people see that bad trait. It gives people a good idea of what you mean when you explain it like that. <3
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Post by KAT on Feb 4, 2012 14:56:22 GMT -5
EDITED.
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Post by Sp❣rit on Feb 4, 2012 15:15:44 GMT -5
You know the drill, you whorecuntragstain.
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